Petulantia

Version Reviewed: v0.4 Overview: No camels were harmed in the making of this game. Story: You're a washed up military man in a knock off of Battlestar Galactica (and a few other franchises). You are banished to an old rustbucket and given the duty to train four cadets in how to be fighter pilots. The candidates are basically Wednesday and Enid from the Wednesday tv show, a cheerleader, and a pink princess. They are also way more interested in teasing the new teacher than actually learning anything. The writing is not great. It's spastic and the plot is just a string of random scenes that happen for little logical reason. The grizzled old guy protagonist acts like a brainless 15 year old half of the time. There are some comedy bits which are nice. The previous commander/teacher was apparently a pornogame protagonist who fully finished his corruption path on all 4 girls and then took himself out of service with tendonitus of the wrists. He's got spy cams and everything. The protagonist is basically making it his mission to un-corrupt them, but we will see how that goes. Art: It's very blatantly AI art. The style changes from click to click. Details are always in flux. There was a decent amount of effort in getting the scenes to look ok, but the consistency is a constant problem. Sex content: How much do camel toes turn you on? Every woman wears painted on pants and the concept of sitting in a ladylike fashion has been completely lost in this future. It's pretty much always a full spread with the pants stuffed all the way up to their cervix. There are some shower scenes too, but given how little the pants hide there's little extra to see there. The most "sex" is a kiss thus far and the game doesn't seem to be in a hurry to go any futher. Conclusion: I don't think AI is an immediate failure for a game, but both the art and writing are too clunky. Maybe this is the future, but it's not quite there yet. Also, there is some untranslated German sprinkled around.

Not bad game. Decent for a AI game. The developer has been clever using space as main theme. All happen in a fictional environment and you don't ended looking for AI glitches in the background all time, like another AI games that take place in past/present. Although it also shares problems that have many AI games and knock you out of the game. The scenes/videos, better avoid, since faces get quite distorted. Or in static images sometimes characters instead of change their facial expression, it looks like his face is melting. Also the writing it's not bad, but lack some progression. At some point in the narrative the author want show us how others characters get MC on his nerves, but I think the way it happen is too abrupt. Making it seem like MC have some severe bipolar disorder.

If you like cameltoes, you are in paradize. If not ... (then its not the fault of the game I guess). One of the best AI graphics I ever saw. And girls /women are lovable, all together. I value graphics by the looks, not by dogmas (if it is AI or not). English text will be better soon (I hope so. Dev tells he is trying). Although text is quite much, I personally like it. It contributes to some atmosphere (about dangers of AI ). Give it a try, try to get used to the special approach. I fully recommend.

The graphic quality is uneven; there are some very beautiful images and animations, and others that are pixelated. Alongside the mature men, there are young women with perfect bodies, but there's a severe lack of mature women showing the wrinkles and signs of age, such as wrinkles, sagging breasts, and rolls of fat.

I was expecting some AI shovelware like so many games that get dumped on this site. Instead, I got pretty detailed & decent sci-fi writing, interesting lore and creative use of AI art and animations - at least in the beginning. Things were going swimmingly until our hero, a washed up fighter pilot, got sent to manage training on a female cadet ship. At this point, the pace seemed to drag, the girls we finally meet frankly aren't very original (although hot as hell), and ESL issues started seriously bleeding into the writing. On the plus side, the dev seems to have a camel toe & latex fetish that I can only applaud. On the negative side, there is no sex, the game is completely kinetic, the MC is mostly an unlikeable douchebag and the dialog, other characters and situation are so cliche and cringe that I just fast forwarded through the final chapter. It's long and a lot of work went into this debut, but it doesn't deserve more than 3 stars at present.

I'm not sure if I'm still in the intro or already in the middle of the story. After about an hour of gameplay—or should I say, reading a picture book? Lots of text against pretty backgrounds—I'd like to offer a brief summary. Despite the sheer amount of text, the story isn't bad so far. References to well-known space operas are immediately apparent. However, I find the MC's characterization a bit over the top. Offering such a loser such a job defies all logic and military resource management. The graphics are clearly AI. The girls are pretty and, as usual, exaggerated in certain scenes. Still, not uninteresting. I've liked the MC less so far, especially his facial expressions. His eyes are too big, look too forced, and there are a few other things. Even if much of it is meant to be humorously exaggerated, it could have been done better. Personally, the German translation gets a plus. It saves me a lot of tedious work and will probably allow me to enjoy the story more in the future. Nevertheless, some spelling mistakes or missing letters are noticeable, or there's the occasional extra letter, so that a word actually has a different meaning, but the text remains perfectly readable. So far, it's easily a 4-star read. If the minor errors are ironed out, it will deserve the fifth star. My only current complaint is that the girls are so smitten with this drunken, washed-up guy. Of course, one might think they just want to wrap him around their little finger to have some peace and quiet. But honestly, he's a complete jerk. I hope that forced detox, sufficient sleep, a healthy diet, and maybe some exercise will restore MC to his former glory, so that it would actually be visually worthwhile for the girls to try and seduce him.

The story and its execution are truly impressive, especially for a debut work. It presents a dark dystopian world that, from today’s perspective, doesn’t feel as far-fetched as one might hope. The cheeky protagonists are both very likable and incredibly sexy, which makes following their journey even more enjoyable. The subtle background music is particularly well done and adds a great deal to the overall atmosphere of the game. I’m genuinely excited to see where this story goes next and hope it will continue for many updates to come. Since this is the developer’s first game, there is clearly a lot of potential still waiting to be explored. With such a promising start, a bit of early praise certainly feels well deserved. 5 Stars And yes, the game was originally created in German, with an English translation added later.

Version .3 The renders and animations are well done. Some comedy is in the narrative including battlestar, star wars, and harry potter mentions among a few. The pace is pretty good. There is also some music and sfx. music repeats so i turned it off after a while, but at least it does change tracks. I didnt hear any voices before i turned off the sound all together. Chapter titles are hardcoded in german. Some renders are a little noisy, and some animations i ask myself why did they waste time animating this? It leaves copyright marks on the ai animations that where created on the web( at least 3 sites i saw). The renders of the women are not really something i like as a personal taste with the long torso or maybe it's the 2 inch waist that makes them look like that. Renders aren't always consistent. And i think the one looks like wensday addams. The story is completely kinetic. It does have a few spelling errors but not too bad. Even with it's flaws it's a compelling story, a little slow burn but even pace.

The art is amazing, the story is well written. Humor is decent. This the definition of a Visual Novel, there are NO choices to be made, just a 100% click fest. Hopefully there will be some "game" elements introduced later on. Personally I am not a fan of VN, but the art and story gave this a higher rating from me.

I spent over an hour reading a really long winded ripoff of battlestar galactica meets I robot story with a very meh protag whos made of grizzled war veteran tropes. Its done in Kling AI which is not the best of choices. For anyone whos impressed by the art, Dont be. its pretty stock and you can just ask kling to make that yourself. But dev is one TOS update away from losing all his work. if you want to dev with AI you need ot use your own machine and LORAs for that. its pretty choiceless and i really didnt feel like there was anything resembling a game or even a VN.

Ok this is a really good start. Pros Great Renders Pretty LIs Story like a cross between Battlestar Galactica & Star Wars Overall premise is there. Cons A lot of the stuff has not translated and is in German still Trixie sings at the end but again the song is in German The videos for some reason still have watermarks on them telling us which program the video used. i am not going to drop stars as this could be fixed easily i am sure. There are actually no choices yet to call this a VN its more kinetic currently, there is no hot scenes really either yet. Looking forward to seeing where this one goes